Brooding Limerick (Limerick-Off Monday)

It’s Limerick-Off time, once again. And that means I write a limerick, and you write your own, using the same first line. Then you post your limerick here and, if you’re a Facebook user, on Facebook too.

The best submission will be crowned Limerick Of The Week. (Here’s last week’s Limerick Of The Week Winner.)

How will your poems be judged? By meter, rhyme, and cleverness. (If you’re feeling a bit fuzzy about limerick writing rules, you can find some helpful resources listed here.)

I’ll announce the Limerick of the Week Winner right before I post next week’s Limerick-Off. So that gives you a full week to submit your clever, polished verse.

I hope you’ll join me in writing a limerick with this first line:

A woman who tended to brood…*

or

A fellow who tended to brood…*

*(Minor variations to my first lines are acceptable, but rhyme words may not be altered.)

Here’s my limerick:

Brooding Limerick
By Madeleine Begun Kane

A woman who tended to brood
Was spotted outdoors in the nude.
“I’d forgotten to dress,”
She explained to the press,
Who depressed her by calling her “dude.”

Please feel free to write your own limerick using the same first line and post it in my comments. And if you’re on Facebook, I hope you’ll join my friends in that same activity on my Facebook Limerick-Off post.

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93 Responses to “Brooding Limerick (Limerick-Off Monday)”

  1. Veralynne says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Found himself in a very good mood!
    After a shit, shower and shave
    He was hot to misbehave
    But at the bar, with a girl, he turned prude.

  2. Veralynne says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Found respite in things that were lewd.
    With her porn flicks and books
    She kept to her nooks,
    Both’ring no one in her neighborhood.

  3. Jean-Esdrace Charles says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Thought no one ever understood!
    Melancholy persists
    As she tried to desist,
    She thought grasping few signs of Good.

  4. Amarnath Mukhopadhyay says:

    Ms. Medeleine, hope it’s not you:
    A woman who tended to brood
    Could never become a rude.
    Confined herself in her room
    Thought of holding a broom
    To clear up everything crude

  5. Amarnath Mukhopadhyay says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    And wished that everyone should
    Be there to cheer him up
    In searching the lost pup
    That’ll really do him good.

    Now with a positive thinking:

    A poor fellow tended to brood
    Over his past, thought he would
    Bring a smile on his face.
    That may, in any case,
    Be helpful to do him good.

  6. Vijaya Prakash says:

    I wrote this before reading yours, Madeleine…

    A fellow who tended to brood
    On shedding his image as ‘prude’
    Stopped wearing his clothes
    Saying “It’s okay I suppose”
    To be a subdued nude dude!”

  7. Vijaya Prakash says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Who, misery and woe, did exude
    Went to a quack
    Who brought her to track
    Now she cracks jokes all lewd and crude!

  8. Rinkly Rimes says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    On anything sexy or nude.
    Would slam shut a book
    Saying ‘I cannot look
    At anything crude, rude or lewd!’

  9. J Sardo says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Danced for her boyfriends quite nude.
    What a happy delight
    They thought they just might
    Set about to changing her mood.

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Came home one night rather stewed
    His wife made him sleep
    On the floor for a week
    Then go without for a month sorry dude.

  10. Jim Delaney says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Had the notion to start up a feud.
    Soon his lust for vendetta
    Outclassed operetta
    For plots that were petty, but skewed.

  11. Pat Hatt says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Did something most found crude
    Getting himself hauled away
    For such a display
    FYI never fart on another dude

  12. patience and the prodigal says:

    a woman who tended to brood
    raised chickens, her favourite food,
    till one night, Freddie fox,
    slipped into her box,
    and gobbled her pullits, then poo’d.

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Checked the price of a barrell of crude,
    “To the devil and hell
    with Exxon and Shell”,
    For the rest of his life he canoed!

  13. A fellow who tended to brood
    Said his mood, it had been misconstrued
    “I’m all better, my dear,
    “After drinking some beer,
    “The cure, it turns out, was brewed!”

  14. scott says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    is appalled at the way she is viewed.
    But she will remember,
    on the 6th of November,
    and the Misogynists will be screwed.

  15. Vivek says:

    A woman who really tended to brood,
    Believed that her man was pretty rude.
    Despite all his charm
    He did himself harm
    When he did not thank her, after they screwed.

  16. Veralynne says:

    A professional who tended to brood
    Thought he might feel better tattooed
    He walked in with a frown
    Had it turned upside down
    As a “permanent” clown, he’s screwed!

  17. Veralynne says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Wrote lim’ricks, some cute and some crude,
    But most were just long
    And she put them to song
    Which ruined EV’RYONE’s mood!

  18. Edmund Conti says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    On the fact he was never tattooed
    Thought bodily art
    Should cover each part.
    (Except for the private ones, dude!)

  19. I read out your limerick to hubby who laughed heartily :O)

  20. A biker who tended to brood
    Had this chick with the same attitude
    She said…”Having your kid was no fun
    But you got what you wanted…a son
    And the little shit’s already tatooed.”

  21. RJ Clarken says:

    A fella who tended to brood
    because he was never tattooed
    went to visit an artist
    who wasn’t the smartest:
    ‘LUCK’ ended up ‘LICK’ (multi-hued.)

  22. RJ Clarken says:

    A fella who tended to brood
    on affairs of the heart, did conclude
    that perhaps if he tried
    a somnambulant bride
    she would not run away when pursued.

  23. scott says:

    A fellow who tended to brood,
    was not in a very good mood.
    ‘Cuz Duke and Missouri,
    went down in a hurry.
    And now my damned bracket is screwed!

  24. Craig says:

    A fellow who tended to brood,
    Who wanted to tan in the nude,
    Found a place with two docks
    But just one allowed ,
    One’s Quay Prude and the other’s Quay Lewd.

  25. Ira Bloom says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Took her bicycle’s wheels to be trued.
    “I just need a rim job,”
    She complained to Jim Bob,
    Which the handsome young hunk misconstrued.
    (sorry- had to purge.)

  26. a woman who tended to brood
    was always then in a bad mood
    her husband said please
    while down on his knees
    a posture he too often rued

    a woman who tended to brood
    was often heard being quite rude
    to him who had fathered
    and then never bothered
    about the twelve young in their brood

    a husband who tended to brood
    re how his wife liked to be shoed
    a pair in each color
    and none of them duller
    than vibrantly, brilliantly hued

  27. Craig says:

    A fellow who tended to brood,
    Had a lap dancer try something lewd,
    But the clumsy young stripper
    Snagged his thing in his zipper –
    It, needless to say, killed the mood.

  28. Craig says:

    A poor fellow who tended to brood,
    Went a-huntin’ to find him some food
    Saw some deer and so, yup,
    Took the shot and soon up
    From the ground came a bubblin’ crude.
    (Oil, that is … black gold … Texas tea …)

  29. Veralynne says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Found a drink or two lightened her mood
    She became quite elated,
    But it soon dissipated.
    She, seven drinks later, was stewed.

  30. Thom says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Sat in the corner and stewed
    He knew that he cheated
    Was caught and defeated
    The jail cell, home now for the dude!

  31. Dr. Goose says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    While pacing about in the nude,
    Was once ago caught
    While lost in a thought
    Where she certainly ought not be viewed. 

  32. Dr. Goose says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    On the right to be seen in the nude 
    Appealed to the court 
    With no briefs in support, 
    So they didn’t know what to conclude. 

  33. Irv Dean says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    found himself in a very good mood;
    “What’s the reason for this?”
    he asked a young miss
    She said, “The music, an etude”

  34. Craig says:

    A fellow was tending to brood
    On a barstool while getting quite stewed.
    When asked where the lass
    Went who had the great ass
    He said sadly “turns out she’s a dude.”

  35. Edmund Weisberg says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Whenever she couldn’t be nude,
    Stripped down to the bone
    Outside on the phone
    As street life took on a new mood.

  36. Mama Zen says:

    That’s hilarious!

  37. kaykuala says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Detest those dudes that intrude
    Have my wants
    And some fun
    Must be smart to detect my mood

    Hank

  38. Edmund Conti says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    On the difference twixt dude and subdued
    Was told not to sweat it
    In fact, to forget it.
    For you, no dissimilitude.

  39. Edmund Conti says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    On the fact that most waiters were rude
    Was told to be hip
    By increasing her tip–
    To Insure (get it, dear) Promptitude.

  40. Edmund Conti says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    When she heard the ideas of Likud
    Said, My song may be sad
    But I won’t make it bad.
    I’ll just keep on singing “Hey Jude.”

  41. Edmund Conti says:

    Said a woman who tended to brood
    On the fact that she never was wooed
    “I’ll just copy and paste
    Some web porn.” (Bad taste!)
    And that’s when she came–all unglued.

  42. Sighed a French hen, who tended to brood,
    “Zee quiet life I’ve long since adieu’d.
    “Till zat randy new rooster
    “Arrived, a gal used ter
    “Live in magnifique désuétude!”

  43. Doggerelo says:

    Santorum has tended to brood
    On banning behavior that’s lewd –
    If I am elected
    Guys won’t get erected
    By pictures of girls in the nude.

  44. Slightly tweaked version to replace earlier post …

    A lim’ricker who tended to brood
    Sobbed, “My endings are simply no good!
    “While my lines 1 thru 4
    “Evoke loud cries of ‘More!’
    “My line 5’s then suck, and get boo’ed.” :(

  45. Michelle Hed says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    had a life long battle with food.
    She liked to eat sweets,
    while between the sheets –
    her husband was seldom in the mood.

  46. Laura Shavis says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Got mad when her husband was rude
    He said, “You’ve gained weight,
    Your body I hate
    So I just can’t get in the mood!”

  47. Errol Nimbly says:

    A woman who tended her brood,
    Followed hens who had eggs to extrude.
    When a randy old rooster
    Ran up and then goosed her,
    She cried, “What a foul interlude!”

  48. Neal P says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    stewed all the while he canoed
    From morning ’til dark,
    Lewis told Clark:
    “Really! I’m not in the mood.”

    [Historical note: It is suspected that Meriwether Lewis later committed suicide at Grinder’s Stand, Tenn.]

  49. zongrik says:

    a mare I owned tended to brood
    whenever she had to get shooed
    she kicked, bucked and fussed
    the farrier just cussed
    as she trotted to eat up her food

    for picture that goes with this see

    brood mare limerick

  50. siggiofmaine says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Wore her hair in a trend-setting snood.
    She knew it was chancy
    To be fancy schmancy,
    For people would think she was stewed.

  51. Mark Megson says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Was often considered quite rude
    But it was all just a sham
    He was a Brando-a-gram
    Though his offers were always refused

  52. John Larkin says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    was labeled by all as a prude.
    But, one day she forgot;
    at the dock on a yacht
    she sat on the deck in the nude.

  53. Steve Earp says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Met up with a good looking dude
    So desperate and needy
    Put out super speedy
    And screamed “fourteen kids” as they screwed.

  54. Veralynne says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Even covered her face in a snood.
    So depressed was she,
    So little could she see,
    She walked right out the door in the nude.
    (Except for the snood.
    So now she was screwed…
    For being lewd.
    Her neighbors? Unglued!
    Except one–he was stewed;
    That’s okay, he was crude.
    SHE was a prude!
    Her neighbors weren’t rude,
    They let her exude
    Confidence as she accrued
    Eyes, mostly blued,
    As she tried to conclude
    Her aimless walk, imbued
    With senseless talk, askewed,
    Desperately seeking an etude
    That just wouldn’t protrude
    From her silly attitude
    Unless she’d allude
    To that she wished to elude
    So she went back home for food.)
    Whew! I couldn’t escape! The great magnitude…………………………

  55. Ira Bloom says:

    A writer who tended to brood,
    Metaphorical ineptitude,
    Wrote self-loathsome stories
    With deep allegories
    Which lacked verisimilitude.

  56. Poetesswug says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    had many who thought she was rude.
    Seeing her expressions like wood,
    they just misunderstood
    her deep thought and ‘don’t care’ attitude.

  57. A woman who tended to brood
    Tried to shake her terrible mood
    She drank and she spat
    She ate herself fat
    Then wondered why sorrow ensued

  58. A woman who tended to brood
    Said ” Dear I am not in the mood.
    Your member is small
    Not three inches tall”
    Now wonders why no sex ensued.

  59. Manicddaily says:

    Haven’t done one, but yours is so clever Madeleine. K.

  60. Marjorie says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Heard some jokes but her lips remained glued,
    She was asked “Why so wry?”
    Here’s her sullen reply:
    “When I smile then my teeth, they protrude.

  61. A woman who tended to brood
    played saturdays always the flute
    and sundays she danced
    bewitched and entranced
    in the happiest weekend mood

    hahah…oh my goodness… i saw you’re doing limericks on thursday at dVerse…this is going to be funny…great having you in the pub m.

  62. Gay says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Over things that time would occlude
    Climbed up the stair
    Fixed up her hair
    Donned bikini to get newly tattooed

  63. Sara McNulty says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    That she’d never have enough food
    Weighed three hundred pounds,
    Most of it Mounds
    Which she wolfed down but failed to include.

    A woman who tended to brood
    That she had never been wooed
    Met a much younger man
    A flash in the pan
    But a torrid affair did ensue.

    A woman who tended to brood
    was a busybody and prude
    `twas gossip she spread
    `bout the living and dead
    While she danced `round her house in the nude.

  64. brian miller says:

    a fellow who tends to brood
    often gets extremely rude
    bites off heads
    in flower beds
    leaving stems that are rather crude

  65. Bruce Niedt says:

    A woman who tended her brood
    of nineteen said, “It’s all attitude:
    I could have twenty-five,
    and it’s all because I’ve
    never said that I’m not in the mood!”

  66. Veralynne says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Started ev’ry day in a bad mood
    Hubby’d tickle her fancy
    She’d perk up, get antsy.
    Breakfast? Anything but subdued!

  67. Bruce Niedt says:

    Said a fellow who tended to brood,
    “I really don’t mean to be lewd,
    but if the Right wins,
    and legislates against “sins”,
    I swear we will truly be screwed.”

  68. Neal P says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    was locked in a family feud
    He worshiped his mother,
    but so did his brother
    with passion at times misconstrued

  69. Daniel Ari says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    wanted soil for raising his food.
    He sneaked into cowherds
    to gather the cow turds.
    For this he was often pooh-poohed.

  70. Daniel Ari says:

    A fellow who tended to brood,
    by a woman routinely pursued,
    could muster no woo.
    When she said, “I love you,”
    he looked in her eyes and went, “Duuuude.”

  71. Bruce Niedt says:

    Slight revision for the sake of the meter and punctuation:

    Said a fellow who tended to brood,
    “I really don’t mean to be lewd,
    but if the Right wins,
    passing laws against ‘sins’,
    I swear we will truly be screwed.”

  72. Daniel Ari says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    turned up at our church in the nude.
    She belted sea shanties
    then auctioned her panties,
    convincing us all she was stewed.
    .
    A fellow who tended to brood
    walked in on his boss in the nude.
    His timing was right
    for her carnal delight–
    though he didn’t intend to intrude.

  73. Edmund Conti says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Over lines that she meant to include
    Said, “Three is just fine
    And Four’s a good line
    But Line Five is sure to be booed.”

  74. Edmund Conti says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Having never once Honolulu’d
    Said, “What’s on my bucket
    List is not Pawtucket
    But places where leis will be strewed.”

  75. Edmund Conti says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    On her life had the sense to conclude:
    Hey, if this is the best
    I can hope for, I’m blessed
    Or, rather more likely, I’m screwed.

  76. Edmund Conti says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    On words just like ‘nude,’ ‘lewd’ and ‘rude’
    Thought the rhymes were too easy
    Which made her feel queasy
    So she just spent the day getting screwed.

  77. Vowed a gal who tended to brood
    “I’m changing my old attitude!
    “No more to-ing, then fro-ing!
    “That’s the wrong way of going!” …
    … and thenceforth, she fro’ed, and then to’ed.

  78. Bone says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    And always was wearing a hood
    Was asked, “Are you a monk?”
    “No, I’m just in a funk.
    My lim’ricks are simply no good.”

  79. Robert Schechter says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Took a pill that uplifted her mood
    And left her concluding
    That all of her brooding
    Had been not just pointless, but rude.

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Said, “I’d be far more cheerful if you’d
    Eat poison and die.
    You’re a tasteful young guy,
    And the maggots could use some good food.”

    A woman who tended to brood
    Took a pill that uplifted her mood
    And left her concluding
    That all of her brooding
    Had been not just pointless, but rude.

    A woman who tended a brood
    Of pigeons who warbled and cooed,
    Killed one and fried it,
    But after she tried it,
    Remarked, “This would taste better stewed.”

    A actor who tended to brood
    When an audience, she felt, was rude,
    Said, “Maybe the play
    Wasn’t perfect, but hey,
    A lawsuit? They should have just booed.”

    A fellow who tended to brood
    When a lion considered him food,
    Declared, “I’m so sorry
    To leave your safari,
    But lions are best when eschewed.”

  80. Robert Schechter says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    On the best definition of “lewd”
    Said, “It’s far more that flirty,
    But not always dirty.
    It’s ribald, but need not be crude.”

    A woman who tended to brood
    Met a fellow who shared the same mood.
    They wound up in bed.
    As one of them said,
    “We might as well screw, since we’re screwed.”

    A woman who tended to brood
    Said, “These poll numbers make me conclude
    We’re heading for doom,
    Armegeddon and gloom.
    Let’s hope that the numbers are skewed.”

    A fellow who tended to brood
    Said, “Stapled or nailed shut or glued
    Would suit your lips fine,
    But I draw the line
    At open — I hope that’s not rude.”

  81. Edmund Conti says:

    Said a fellow who tended to brood
    On the limericks that Schechter accrued:
    Oh please, make him stop
    ‘Cause my head’s going to pop
    And I don’t have another Quaalude!

  82. Edmund Conti says:

    Said a fellow who tended to brood
    On the “Stand your ground” Law attitude,
    Do not stand; do not run;
    And make sure you’re the one
    Who pursues and is not thus pursued.

  83. KC Sloan says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Was incensed when a cad called her rude,
    She said, “Listen mate,
    Let’s get one thing straight!
    Your bad manners trump my attitude!”

  84. sheila says:

    a fellow who tended a brood
    (of birds that just hatched I conclude)
    decided they’d want
    to eat a croissant
    and now they all sing very rude.

  85. A lawyer who tended to brood
    Every time his client was sued
    Forgot how he was paid
    Of losing he was afraid
    And winning his fear did preclude

  86. Patti says:

    First timer here. Playing in your limerick sandbox on dVerse was so much fun, I’m back for more.

    A woman who tended to brood
    Often got a bee in her snood
    It buzzed ’round her brain
    Drove her wildly insane
    ‘Til finally one day she…KABOOM!

  87. Johanna Richmond says:

    A woman who tended to brood
    Met a man who was far from a prude.
    She abandoned her stewing
    When he whispered while wooing
    “Why eat sponge when you crave devil’s food?”

  88. Johanna Richmond says:

    A fellow who tended to brood
    When his wife said his farting was rude
    Wreaked his vengeance one night
    Through sheer sphinctoral might:
    In the form of a Chopin etude.

  89. Ellen Garneau says:

    A woman who tended to brood,
    Heard a “good” friend say she was rude,
    “Kiss my Ass You Freak”
    She said in a streak,
    And now they all think she’s just lewd!

  90. Mark Kane says:

    A fellow who tended to brood,
    Cuz his wife never seemed “in the mood,”
    He’d say “lady let’s f*ck,
    Time to please this old buck.”
    Perhaps if he wasn’t so crude?

  91. Johanna Richmond says:

    A server who tended to brood
    At parties where rich folk were rude
    Flashed a vertical smile
    The invitees found vile;
    Now the host with the mostest is screwed.

  92. Tiger’s wife, Elin, tended to brood
    When she saw pics of his bimbos nude
    She said…”No need to drive into a tree
    Ninety million will set you free”
    Now his sign says…”Will play for food”

  93. madkane says:

    Thanks so much everyone for your entertaining limericks! This Limerick-Off is officially over.

    And the winner is…

    Congratulations to the Limerick of the Week Winner, the Facebook Friends’ Choice Award Winner, and the Honorable Mention Winners: Limerick of the Week 54.

    But you can still have lots of limerick fun, because a new Limerick-Off has already begun: Uptight Limerick.