Vain Limerick

Once again, it’s Limerick-Off time. And that means I write a limerick, and you write your own, using the same first line. Then you post your limerick here and, if you’re a Facebook user, on Facebook too.

So I hope you’ll join me in writing a limerick with this first line:

A man who was terribly vain…

Here’s mine:

Vain Limerick
By Madeleine Begun Kane

A man who was terribly vain
Was obsessed with his looks on the wane.
He considered a nip
And a tuck, but did zip.
Said “I haven’t got time for the pain.”

(My apologies to Carly Simon.)

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28 Responses to “Vain Limerick”

  1. Lynny says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    loved to flash his incredible mane
    one day it fell out
    from his head not his snout
    so good looks he could no longer feign

  2. Mardix says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    whose body was really quite plain
    he stripped for his girl
    but couldn’t unfurl
    “No wait, please, do let me explain”

  3. Veralynne Pepper says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Accessorized with top hat and cane
    His monocle and watch fob
    Completed the snow job
    But barefoot, he still looked insane.

  4. jesse levy says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    had State secrets stored in his brain
    He thought himself great
    but this terrible trait
    got him thrown violently from a train

  5. jesse levy says:

    A gal who was terribly vain
    threw a bowling ball right down the lane
    It missed all the pins
    so she kicked in the shins
    her date who now walks with a cane.

  6. Veralynne Pepper says:

    A gal who was terribly vain
    Liked to live in the fast lane
    So she “sang” for her suppers
    And her downers and uppers
    Now she’s totally blown out her brain

  7. Marla says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Had appetites he struggled to constrain
    H’d come home late at night
    With his eyes lit up bright
    Courtesy of champagne, cocaine and butane.

  8. Marla says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Was sung about on Carly’s refrain
    She always kept us guessin’
    But now we know it was David Geffen –
    What a letdown and how very mundane.

  9. madkane says:

    These are wonderful! Please keep them coming. Thanks!

  10. A man who was terribly vain
    thought he looked like Michael Caine.
    He preened and he primped
    til he looked like a chimp
    and danced like Margot Fonteyn.

  11. Laurie Kolp says:

    A man who was terribly vain,
    Spent his life in search of cocaine.
    Like a wolf on the prowl
    He’d holler and howl
    To bolster his ego; insane!

  12. A man who was terribly vain
    Had a lunch date with Shirley MacLaine
    She said, “There’s another
    “In fact, he’s my brother!
    “Who makes you look awfully plain…”

  13. Peter Metrinko says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Thought looking while jogging inane
    He needed to focus
    Ignoring his locus
    One day he got creamed by a train

  14. Edmund Weisberg says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    At the sight of gray dyed his manly mane.
    But the hue went askew
    From his brown to true blue,
    Which he finds heroic, hardly inane.

  15. Swisstoons says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Refused to go out in the rain,
    After hours of care
    Spent preening his hair,
    His magnificent mane to retain.

  16. scott says:

    A man who was terribly vain,
    Said “oldness is all in the brain.”
    He survived 98 years,
    on cigars and beers,
    and outlived that darn Jack LaLanne.

    A man who was terribly vain
    Lay writhing in terrible pain
    It seems his refection
    gave him an erection
    and it shattered his mirror once again

  17. scott says:

    A man who was terribly vain,
    is no more the young ladies’ swain.
    Because his savior faire,
    along with his hair,
    have both disappeared down the drain.

  18. madkane says:

    These are just delightful! Thanks, and please keep them coming!

  19. Steve Vitoff says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Would never come in from the rain
    When his friends asked him why
    He would utter a sigh
    “I look good when I’m wet,” he’d explain

  20. Steve Vitoff says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Would steadily sing this refrain:
    “I look so damn good
    I think that I should
    Peek into my mirror again!”

  21. Dr. Goose says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Carried on, with his wife on the wane,
    With his new lady love,
    Who made videos of
    His failed presidential campaign.

  22. Patrick says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    was equally just as insane.
    He’s quite loonie-toonie,
    thinks himself George Cloony
    when he ain’t even suave as John Wayne.

    Liked the nod to Carly Simon
    How not when you’re rhymin’?
    But is “You’re so vain”
    as clever as Mad Kane?
    If ‘no’ you say, then I’m in.

  23. John says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Had a rug for a mane
    The wind hard it blew
    My how that rug flew
    He now wears a hat for the shame.

  24. Elizabeth Vallone says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Was forced to carry a cane
    His leg had been shot
    When he was stoned on some pot
    And swore never to smoke again

  25. Hansi says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    Was also clumsy; his name was Wayne.
    He fell off some lass
    While enjoying some ass
    And swore he’d never do it againe.

  26. deathsweep says:

    A man who was terribly vain
    thought he needed a spanking new name
    when faced with the change,
    paperwork so deranged,
    he decided to keep it the same

  27. marit says:

    bahahaha. I had to read this because of your comment on poet’s united “I sure hope I didn’t write this limerick in vain” – haha. This is smart.

  28. madkane says:

    Thanks everyone for your comments and fun limericks. Please keep your verse coming!