My Aching Back! (Limerick)

Oh, what have I done to my back?
It’s been painfully thrown out of whack.
Worst of all, there’s no tale
To explain my travail;
One false move, and I’m spasming. Ack!!!

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One Response to “My Aching Back! (Limerick)”

  1. Humbly suggest

    spasming, Alack!

    JUst don’t think it’s OK to give “spasming” three syllables. Otherwise your work is wonderful.

    From MBK: Thanks for your kind words and suggestion. I actually struggled with the spasming syllables issue. I even looked it up in howmanysyllables.com, which does agree with you.

    However, I pronounce it in the same 3-syllable way that the woman does in this audio clip.