Unstuck (Limerick)
Unstuck (Limerick)
By Madeleine Begun Kane
Whenever I feel like I’m stuck —
Like I’m trapped in a rut or in muck,
I attempt something new.
(What else can you do?)
And sometimes that changes my luck.
(Inspired by Big Tent Poetry’s stuck prompt.)
Tags: Being In A Rut, Big Tent Poetry, Feeling Trapped Humor, Luck Limerick, Self-Help Humor, Self-Improvement
Love the wry comment in the last line! No guarantees attached to luck!
Wow!! must try that something new!! Right now my luck is in the muck, stuck!! :D
Lovely Ms. Madeleine
Love this, Madeleine! Sounds a little like the story of my life lately…LOL! Well done…
Lynette
Imagination Lane
fun and wise advice
nice theme thursday and Slàinte
It does Maddie! It often does.. :)
Very well written- one of the finest limericks I have read ever..
Wishing you all the Luck xoxox
Change of scenery always does the spirit good. Good advice.
Great way to celebrate TT & St. Paddy’s.
Thanks so much, everyone. I appreciate your enthusiasm!
Exactly! I subacribe to that philosophy.
Nice Post. Deeds do modify luck.
God Bless
This is a good reminder of how luck changes if you change things. :)
Searched
Great advice in witty verse!
Clever…and quite true
Love it!
lost in a maze
simply put, yet loved your wit in it.
well done entry.
Here is My Entry, Thanks for reading!
Indeed. I’m going to use a new word, here… Wowzers!
I’d say that is exactly what to do, Madeleine. Clever piece.
Pamela
bingo !! right on Lady !!
Good job. Especially like the use of parenthetical aside in fourth line. Vb
LOL!!! Thanks yet again, for the smile. I love your humor.
Meryl
Who knew? The power of a limerick.
Funny but true.
Ah. Not trying new is the sure way not to change.
Ah, when it works! Nice limerick…
I’m confident your luck will change. Keep the humour coming.
what fun! and perfect for st. patrick’s day!!
I find that trying a new poetry form sometimes helps me get unstuck! Nice poem.
Thanks so much to all of you for your enthusiastic comments!
hehehe… a good thing to do, Madeleine.. a change of task usually clears up a muddled/tired mind.. whheeww…
Thanks, Kavita!