Whimsical Limerick

I hope you’ll join me in writing a limerick with this first line:

A woman succumbed to a whim…

Here’s mine:

Whimsical Limerick
By Madeleine Begun Kane

A woman succumbed to a whim
And enrolled in an overpriced gym.
She tried free weights, machines,
Even yoga for teens,
Till she ran out of money and vim.

Please feel free to write your own limerick using the same first line and post it in my comments. And if you’re on Facebook, I hope you’ll join my friends in that same activity in my Limerick-Offs.

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23 Responses to “Whimsical Limerick”

  1. Dr. Goose says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim,
    While she ought to have been in the gym;
    She engaged in pilates
    With a couple of hotties
    By the names of Roberto and Slim.

  2. Jesse Levy says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    To try to live life like a Him.
    She added a dingus
    But you see, the thing is
    There’s more to a man than just that, Jim.

  3. Peter Metrinko says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    She took off her clothes for a swim
    Some picnicking nuns
    Saw her taut buns
    And sang out a glorious hymn…

  4. Elisson says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim:
    While she dangled from her jungle gym,
    Rang up her boyfriend Paul
    Saying, “This booty-call
    Needs you to go out on a limb.”

  5. Poetikat says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    She went literally, out on a limb
    To her ear, came a crack
    Then she fell on her back
    For you see, she was fat and not slim.

  6. A woman succumbed to a whim,
    Bought a bionic prosthetic limb,
    Her arm had such power,
    Glossed her house in an hour,
    While her normal arm painted the trim

  7. A woman succumbed to a whim
    and here my story becomes grim.
    Out making merry
    she met a fairy
    who turned herself into a him.

  8. Jeff says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    And met a rich man at the gym
    He wanted to be lean
    Asked advice re which machine
    She took him straight to the nearest ATM.

  9. Nate Levin says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim–
    A moonlit-night–skinny-dip swim.
    She had a great time
    In the pond’s muck and slime–
    The only real bummer was…..him!

  10. stugod says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim and shaved all the hair off her quim. Be back in a bit. I need relief ha ha

  11. Corrected
    A woman succumbed to a whim
    and here this sex story turns grim.
    While out making merry
    she met a gay fairy
    who turned that gal into a him.

  12. Steve Bumgarner says:

    Rest In Peace. A Limerick.

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    Vowed she’d go for a Guiness Book swim.
    Thought it’d sure be terrific
    If she swam the Pacific.
    But it turned out, she lacked the vim.

  13. madkane says:

    Well these are great fun! Thanks and please keep them coming! And if you’re on Facebook, please post them there as well.

  14. Brion Emde says:

    I went all Tolkien on it :-)

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    And believed she was Galadrim
    I’m a wood-elf, she said
    As she baked lembas bread
    And sang Elvish in forests dim

  15. Ann Milk says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    was tempted by lace in Size slim
    Feels sharp like a cut
    when they go up her butt
    Gone commando, not proper nor prim!

  16. K Bhattacharya says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim…
    Blessed with an intellect rather dim,
    She picked up a skunk
    And tickled its trunk-
    The jettisoned gas threw her into the swim!…

  17. Patrice of the ManyCats says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    And strode out on the Grand Canyon’s rim,
    Misstepped – plunged to her death?
    We stared down, heard a breath:
    “What bad luck! This is such a slim limb…”

  18. Patrice of the ManyCats says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    When her ex jeered her prospects were dim:
    Joined a gym, became slim
    Now dates Randy, Jack, Jim…
    Her ex wants her back (un-trim him)

  19. Patrice of the ManyCats says:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    Loudly bellowed each lovely church hymn
    ‘Til her husband, the pastor
    Ears alert to disaster
    Urged: “Madge, dear, leave the singing to Him…”

    She protested, “We sing for the living:
    I enjoy it, in the spirit of giving!”
    He sighed: “Witness the flight
    Of our congregation tonight
    Now it’s you needs forgiving…”

    Next Sunday, back all warily crept:
    Would they begin to wish they had slept
    In? Now sitting, eyed Madge
    Bitter smile, wearing badge:
    “The Pastor says my singing’s INEPT”

    Relieved congregants smiled: no more racket!
    But Madge glared, set to pounce and attack – it
    Was clear to the pastor
    Who prayed to his Master
    And stepped forward: “Madge, love, here’s a plaque: it

    Comes with love from the whole congregation!
    (Who stared at him in great consternation)
    And we beg you to play
    Our new organ today!”
    Would Madge cling to her ire, condemnation?

    She defiantly one last hymn did bellow
    People gritted their teeth – sounds from h*ll! Oh…
    Madge grinned ’round, took a bow
    One man whispered, “Good for now
    But Pastor’ll soon need a cello..”

  20. A woman succumbed to a whim–Oh?
    ‘Twas a belly rub for Great Dane, Big Jimbo.
    His hind leg started spinning
    She couldn’t help grinning
    ‘Til she landed downtown via… lim(b)o.

  21. steve vitoff says:

    patrice, how can i follow that? yeesh! anyway, here go two:

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    To go for a quick midnight swim
    But as she went splashin’
    The waves started crashin’
    So next time, she’ll opt for the gym

    A woman succumbed to a whim
    To buy the world’s best jungle gym
    She sure got a sound one
    When she went and found one
    Designed by Mead, White and McKim

  22. Roger Morlaw says:

    A woman succombed to a whim
    Because she felt completely dim.
    She wanted a spark
    To wake up the mark
    Of life that she’d lost drinking gin.

    Now this woman was not unintelligent
    She knew that a whim could be tribulent
    So she carried it through
    Then without long adieu
    She rapidly walked out on him.

    And so to all whims seeking women,
    Remember this lesson that’s given;
    Women look very pretty
    But just like this ditty
    They may end as begun
    And it may not be fun,
    Leaving an unhappy whim in the end.

    or

    A woman succombed to a whim
    To make her body more trim.
    She enlightened herself
    With a three foot one elf
    Who sang ditties
    From the brothers Grimm.

  23. Rosanna says:

    A woman succombed to a whim
    And entered a room, even if it was dim.
    She grappled her way through
    And stumbled on some goo.
    The goo was actually ghee
    Waiting to be eaten by a yogi.