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This Haiku Has Legs

Two legs — once scrawny,
Now attractively muscled.
The up side of stairs.

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This entry was posted on Saturday, February 16th, 2008 at 2:10 am and is filed under Haiku & Senryu, Physical Appearance, Poetry & Prompts. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. Both comments and pings are currently closed.

9 Responses to “This Haiku Has Legs”

  1. Soulless says:
    February 16, 2008 at 3:32 pm

    This haiku has practical wisdom, too. ;)

    Walking up and down the stairs with high heels, though, is another matter. (Hello, varicose veins. Grin.)

  2. Deb says:
    February 17, 2008 at 12:30 pm

    Good Monday 2 you! LOL Great job! Come check out my blog, in 2’s.

  3. Corina says:
    February 18, 2008 at 4:41 pm

    I like this one too. I tried the body part thing but it’s not working. I’ll keep trying. It’s a challenge and I’m usually up to that!

  4. paisley says:
    February 18, 2008 at 8:36 pm

    this was fun , mad… i guess i will have to get used to being scrawny… as i have no steps,, and god knows real exercise is absolutely out of the question!!!!!!!!

  5. Linda Jacobs says:
    February 18, 2008 at 9:48 pm

    I like a haiku like this that says so much!

  6. Noah says:
    February 18, 2008 at 10:37 pm

    I keep reading this, and every time I glance it’s more and more interesting.

  7. gautami tripathy says:
    February 19, 2008 at 8:57 am

    you are so god at haiku. this is indeed very interesting.

    ode for convoluted crevices

  8. ...deb says:
    February 20, 2008 at 12:21 am

    Ha! Love the pun in the last line.

  9. SweetTalkingGuy says:
    February 20, 2008 at 10:54 am

    Don’t you just love stairs?